i love the story!!! and the characters are creepy! but oe thing you need to work on is punctuation.
I loved the way you came up with the zombies.
It was fun,scary kind of and you could make it more fun with action
this was awesome!!!!
it was a good story
After looking at the books Mr Jamie's class had made, we decided to have a go ourselves. This is Grade 5Ms first attempt at using Storybird. We hope you like our stories.