good story i couldn't find any mistakes but when his mom said "no no" but other than that great story title.
I loved this story! It was very well thought of. I liked the settings that you had chosen. It was nice. Good job. I also liked the pictures.
Nice story i really liked it. Great story
Fantastic story Ben. I like how you made the photos fit in very well with the story and I thing you organized it very well.
It was a very nice story the name Ridge was very nice name it was a intelligent Story.
Could put little bit of action and happiness
After looking at the books Mr Jamie's class had made, we decided to have a go ourselves. This is Grade 5Ms first attempt at using Storybird. We hope you like our stories.