I love the story you used a lot of wow words. Firs she is bord and then she have a lot of fun.One think.Why you didn´t put the best day in the beach? I like the part that she said to her mum to go and have fun with the brothers, sister and dad.
wow charlotte i love your story but you know i already told you that when you were writing it but i still find it amazing
Improve capitals and spelling, but otherwise I liked your story.
After looking at the books Mr Jamie's class had made, we decided to have a go ourselves. This is Grade 5Ms first attempt at using Storybird. We hope you like our stories.