- Mathmates
- Mr Brownes precept
- Look at 3 people's stories in their knowledge banks and leave them some feedback either on their KB or on this blog.
22 Comments
Tanay
2/2/2014 08:42:44 pm
Krish: I like your knowledge bank and it had some effort and hard work in it. but be careful with your punctuation.
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Tanay
2/4/2014 12:11:59 pm
Ben: You have done lot of hard work and i like your genius hour some spelling mistakes but well done.
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Tanay
2/5/2014 12:48:32 am
Tariq: I like how you wrote about your favorite football team and you have lot of genius hours. I really like it
Charlotte
2/2/2014 09:42:24 pm
I really like Krish's work on his knowledge band. It is very impressive, but the one thing is he didn't have the central ideas because it said 'The central idea for sharing the planet is' and then it wasn't there!
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Carolina
2/2/2014 09:49:40 pm
Do the knowledge banks we will look at need to be from our class or it can be from the other classes too?
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Tariq Ali
2/2/2014 10:25:35 pm
Tristan: I think your knowledge bank is very well set out and it's been organized very well and I think this knowledge bank is teriffic.
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Carol!na
2/3/2014 09:21:06 pm
Tariq: I think your KB is very organized and really well set, the only thing is that there is no work in any unit of inquiry.
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Jescah
2/3/2014 09:30:18 pm
Charlotte: i think your KB was really well set and all the information were in the places they were sapposed to be.
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alma
2/3/2014 10:50:07 pm
freddy: lots of stof info and more it it grat
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Ben
2/4/2014 01:02:28 am
Tristan: I think your KN is very well organised and you have put all your piece's of work in there. WELL DONE!!!!
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michelle :)
2/4/2014 03:40:12 pm
Krish: I think that your knowledge bank is well organised and has a lot of your work.
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Freddy
2/4/2014 09:31:34 pm
Krish: i think you hooked the reader at first and your beginning was good but for next time go in a little more detail and use more full stops
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charlotte
2/4/2014 09:44:55 pm
Deborah: I think deborahs was very neatthe way she set it up and i think she needs to at least put a bit more work into it!
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kaja
2/4/2014 09:53:33 pm
DEBORAH:i think deborah has a very neet knowladge bank and i like the way she set it out but she should put something on her langauge.
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kaja
2/4/2014 09:55:15 pm
i like the way you set your knowladge bank out and it is very neet.
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kaja
2/4/2014 09:56:07 pm
for sarah:
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Tolu
2/5/2014 12:03:56 am
Anna: nice story a few spelling mistakes but good story
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Tristan
2/5/2014 10:55:06 pm
Kaja: okay story but I feelt thqt you should of revised and checked youre grammar. And also you should of wrote more
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Orlando
2/5/2014 11:48:00 pm
Irealy liked krishes but I think That he needs to add more pictures
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Farah
2/5/2014 11:48:52 pm
Sarah's Story:
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Debstar
2/6/2014 03:09:24 am
Carolina's was well set out you can see that she spent a lot of time on hers.but when she's writing sometimes she needs to make sense.but really good👌👌✋👍
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Debby
2/6/2014 03:15:25 am
Sarah your story was amazing out of ten I will give you a 8 because somehow I would if you had really ended the story with a amazing ending your stating was really good ✋😃💁👏
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