Krish: I like your knowledge bank and it had some effort and hard work in it. but be careful with your punctuation.
Ben: You have done lot of hard work and i like your genius hour some spelling mistakes but well done.
Tariq: I like how you wrote about your favorite football team and you have lot of genius hours. I really like it
I really like Krish's work on his knowledge band. It is very impressive, but the one thing is he didn't have the central ideas because it said 'The central idea for sharing the planet is' and then it wasn't there!
Do the knowledge banks we will look at need to be from our class or it can be from the other classes too?
Tristan: I think your knowledge bank is very well set out and it's been organized very well and I think this knowledge bank is teriffic.
Tanay: I think this is a nice knowledge bank but they're no photos.
Freddy: I think that this is a good knowledge bank but maybe you shood add some photos to your knowledge bank and add some more writing to your activities out of school page.
Tariq: I think your KB is very organized and really well set, the only thing is that there is no work in any unit of inquiry.
Sarah: Sarah great work! I really think your KB is organized and very detailed.
Charlotte: I think yhid is a very nice and organized KB, butt the only thing is that you need to add some more work that you have done.
Charlotte: i think your KB was really well set and all the information were in the places they were sapposed to be.
Kaja: Brilliant work. I love your all home page because it was really made me want to look through your page
Sarah: Great, well orginized!!!
freddy: lots of stof info and more it it grat
jes: it is GRAT
Tristan: I think your KN is very well organised and you have put all your piece's of work in there. WELL DONE!!!!
Tariq: I think you put the info in a very organised way which helps the reader understand. Check over the spelling. WELL DONE!!!!
Tolu: I think its very good but maybe go and look for any last mistakes. WELL DONE!!!!
Krish: I think that your knowledge bank is well organised and has a lot of your work.
Freddy: I think your knowledge bank is interesting but I think that you should add a bit more writing.
Sarah: I think your knowledge bank is set out well and has a lot of information.
Krish: i think you hooked the reader at first and your beginning was good but for next time go in a little more detail and use more full stops
Tolu: Your beginning was really interesting and you went into a lot of detail but for next time maybe some dialogue at the start.
Anna: I think you beginning was very detailed and it really flowed with the story. You also included some strong words like illuminating. So all in all good job
Deborah: I think deborahs was very neatthe way she set it up and i think she needs to at least put a bit more work into it!
DEBORAH:i think deborah has a very neet knowladge bank and i like the way she set it out but she should put something on her langauge.
i like the way you set your knowladge bank out and it is very neet.
Anna: nice story a few spelling mistakes but good story
Krish: nice knowledge bank but use a bit more writing
Tariq : nice story and I liked the general
Kaja: okay story but I feelt thqt you should of revised and checked youre grammar. And also you should of wrote more
Good idea for the story.
Tanay: I actually really enjoyed youre story. I read it for the first time and then now and it is much better now. Almost perfect pretty good.
Krish: Youre story was well thought of. It was okay. But maybe you could wright in a little bit more in details.
Irealy liked krishes but I think That he needs to add more pictures
I truly believe your story was well thought out and easy to follow. The names and sayings you gave your machines were top notch. I loved how your story was descriptive, especially, the first paragraph, It really gave me a sense of what was going on and who was who and who and their personalities. I thoroughly enjoyed this story, and your sci fi theme was easily picked out. I think that you need to work on sentence structure, and how long and short and they should link together easily. Really amazing, though!!! :)
Carolina's was well set out you can see that she spent a lot of time on hers.but when she's writing sometimes she needs to make sense.but really good👌👌✋👍
Sarah your story was amazing out of ten I will give you a 8 because somehow I would if you had really ended the story with a amazing ending your stating was really good ✋😃💁👏